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luca1 2

cool - she used her shrinking device I love how you use every single little element that was originally just a side plot thingy to make the story more attractive Chewys

If I may - imo - considering Bulma is not angry with Yamcha (quite the opposite since she came to rescue him) the word "dumbass" feels a bit rough, don't You think? Also "saying" feels a bit off in that sentence - "what are you talking about silly?" would be my suggestion for her here

As for Yamcha - I feel like "What have you done?" would be more correct here

Can't wait for the rest of the crew to show up They do take their time

luca1 09/29/2020 10:18:43   
Chewys 27
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Haha, true, i´ll put "What have you done?"

As for the dumbass... well, he was about to die and make her a lonely mother, i´m pretty sure she´s a bit mad

Chewys 09/29/2020 15:26:34   
alain57 2

Is bulma in underwear ? If yes this is not a good idea and may make yamcha go crazy
I'm also surprise that she stays, didn't she noticed that the other guy is even stronger than Napa ? She only survive by luck, why stay without any weapon ...

alain57 09/29/2020 10:35:03   
Rafael955 2

Great page, but now I wonder how they're gonna deal with Cui, Nappa I'm sure was at least knocked out cold after that, even Cui felt that, their only hope is Vegeta showing up now or Dr. Gero androids.

Rafael955 09/29/2020 20:53:05   
Jason Phoenix 8

Uh, just to be sure what is Kiwi reacting to? The sound of the explosion?

Jason Phoenix 09/29/2020 20:54:52   
Chewys 27
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Blast and light mainly

Chewys 09/29/2020 23:13:36   
Jason Phoenix 8

Thank you!

Jason Phoenix 09/30/2020 14:24:21   
Forofgold 11

¿In english'

Forofgold 10/02/2020 02:54:07   
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