"So you think the tip of the sword is a kill?"
I see what you did there Chewys
Sorry to write to you about this, but your French translation is a little strange. In French we don't say "rat misérable" but "misérables rats". And the "Mouri" should be a "Mour..." for the beginning of "Mourez tous", or "Dis..." for the beginning of "Disparaissez", or "Crev..." for the begining of "Crevez tous".
I tried to propose a translation but since you published it first, yours is displayed.
I'll delete mine so yours shows up
Panels 3 and 4 are taken from Dragon Ball F, made by the great Torrijos!!!
Dammit Kami. Can't you aim somewhere important! This "missed the vital organs" thing might be funny, but this guy has killed almost everybody now.
I don't know... i'd say that the blade of that sword entered into the liver, went on piercing the right lung, right through the heart and into the left shoulder...look at the angle i
Lung + heart.... vital enough for me plus the bleeding from the 3 successive wounds (Kienzan and 2 sword blows)! If he is not dead it's the perfect time for satan to show up and take all the credit xD
Raditz: "Good thing you aim, as bad as you fight. You missed my vital organs!"
Yamcha: "All of them?!" gets smacked down
Kami: "Are you sure about that?" stabs Raditz
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I absolutely love the structure of this fight. It really captures the brutality of the original Saiyan arc fights. By the end, everyone is just trashed. This is a fight with some real stakes, you really feel the desperation from the characters, you understand the blows Raditz has taken and thus how overwhelmingly powerful he is as a result. It doesn't feel like the usual DB fight where a flurry of punches really doesn't amount to much. Every strike matters, every desperate move has a purpose, and most of all, it all adds up over time.
I genuinely have not felt this invested in a fight since the original Nappa/Vegeta vs Z Warriors fight from the Manga itself. Looking forward to seeing what you do with the characters after the fight's conclusion. Keep up the great work Chewy!
I also agree that this was the best fight since DB Classic, I could feel the danger, the unpredictability at the extreme of the fight, I'm impressed the bridge to say that this was better than the original fight. I hope Raditz finally dies at Kami-Sama's hands, this fight was really tense, you can feel the real fear, I hope training with Lord North Kaioh is harder than it was for Son Goku, and The Human Z Warriors learn it TECHNIQUES (here opens a range of possibilities), is serious strategies to win, here you can not rely only on a WARRIOR, individualism is worth nothing in UNIVERSE 9.
The Human Z Warriors will need to train hard, but I think they can complete the training before one year, one thing that people, Dragon Ball fans forget is that HUMANS have a much greater responsiveness than other Dragon Ball races. , they have higher power gain of all races featured in Dragon Ball, humans may be the weakest compared to other aliens, but they have the highest growth capacity. Before long, they get bigger results better. Not to mention that they are more likely to fight in a united group.
Let's take a look at the list of available warriors (can revive with Dragon Balls) to fight the Sayajins [Vegeta and Nappa], we have Muten Roshi [Master Kame], Tenchiran and Chaos, Lord Popo [although I don't think I will fight. , but can train], Kuririn, Yamcha [unless Doctor Gero and the rest of RR wish to kidnap him].
Not to mention that Kami-Sama could recruit other HUMAN WARRIORS such as Hercules, Yajirobe, King Chapa, Nam [and this character deserved more than the story gave him] and even Pamput, there could also be some recruited fighters [it's a total scenario despair] like Lunch and Ranfan (it would be fun for her to use her tricks on Nappa, they work with him). Put these humans to train with Kami-Sama, they would be excellent assistants and can be used as good secondary characters to deepen the more emotional side of this Dragon Ball "COMIC".
Not to mention the ace under the sleeve that the Human Z Warriors have, the room of time and space, where one day equals one year. They would become extremely strong, I think and the weaker ones probably won't get in there, but Kami-Sama would suggest that those who trained with Lord North Kaioh use the room (this if they complete their training before the Sayajins arrive).
Author : Chewys
Team : Atan, valmito, This....IS MY BOOMSTICK, Demerzel
Translation by : This....IS MY BOOMSTICK
Original Language: Español
Releasing pace: Tuesday, Saturday
Type : manga
Genre : Action
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