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John Boredonquixote 6

There are some spelling issues in the page.

First bubble: not a spelling mistake,just the word ''resistant'' doesn't seem right to me for the meaning you are trying to convey.Maybe ''shows/has high endurance'' ?

Second bubble: it seems dr Gero learned spanish form Gerkin ,its ''Surgical''.Next in the line are :''Cybernetic'' and ''Lethal''.Also i am not sure if the use of the gerund ''Torturing'' is correct that way,if thats the case try ''painful''

Second panel: its ''Resilience''

All in all great page as usual Chewys I love dr Gero's characterization.Not the child,the number.For me it showed a very very subtle glimpse of empathy from the good doctor.And how cruel he is man!Chi Chi turns out to be just a guinea pig for the next models I guess we will see no more from her

John Boredonquixote 01/23/2018 10:43:54   
Chewys 21
Author

Thanks John!! Fixed

Chewys 01/23/2018 19:13:46   
AnimeChicken 4

Wait so who is Number 10

AnimeChicken 01/23/2018 22:34:07   
Chewys 21
Author

Mmmm... I guess it's a failure like in Dragon Ball.

Chewys 01/25/2018 00:21:24   
AnimeChicken 4

Also Chewys I was wondering if at some point maybe Dr Raichi and Piccilo Diamao will team up against the Saiyans because they both now have a hatred towards them and Raichi didn't seem surprised at Piccilo being at the multiverse tournament as if he knew him sort of..I dunno I just think it would be cool it would really emphasize the fall of the Saiyans in this universe..I would love to see that and see Bardock going into hiding because of it..just and idea though it's your story after all

AnimeChicken 01/26/2018 20:00:38   
Chewys 21
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Mmmm... Raichi didn´t know Piccolo´s name at the tournament... so most likely they had never met:

http://www.dragonball-multiver...se.com/en/pages/final/0491.png

Chewys 01/27/2018 03:51:18   
AnimeChicken 4

That's true and that's what I meant by sort of like maybe they never physically met before then but Raichi knew of his existence..he could potentially lead the charge or serve as a distraction for the Saiyans while Raichi plans a strike? I wouldn't be surprised if Piccilo Diamao was actually a major part in the Saiyan downfall. Otherwise he wouldn't know of him at all instead of just not knowing his name. Also "nameless one" could refer to the nameless son of Katas so that doesn't necessarily mean he doesn't know him since we know he is one with Kami.

AnimeChicken 01/27/2018 04:57:32   
Chewys 21
Author

Ahhh, of course, that´s diffrent... i too think Piccollo has an important part in the Saiyan downfall... i mean, he already defeated Gerkin who could have been a Super Saiyan in a few years... who knows what other saiyans will come to challange, scattering saiyan forces, giving Raichi some powerful ghosts...

Chewys 01/27/2018 12:57:58   
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DBM U3 & U9: Una Tierra sin Goku

DBM U3 & U9: Una Tierra sin Goku: cover

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Translation by : Chewys

Original Language: Español

Releasing pace: Tuesday, Saturday

Type : manga

Genre : Action



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