Karasu
Fantasy - SF
by fakehero
After two years of fruitless job-searching, Karasu's savings were running dry. With barely enough money to last him the month, he needed a job. Soon. As he was reaching his wit's end, Karasu...
Pages: 21
Updated: 25Sep
Cool story !
Nyuki 05/07/2014 15:09:07Nice
artmerc 06/12/2014 12:22:10My honest opinion:
Death-carioca 06/20/2014 17:43:25The beginning was great, i felt like I was watching the very first minutes of the movie UP, simple, yet, so sad and great done. Granted, Up is still superior for having mostly mute scenes, which makes scenes more powerful.
The demons on the story are pointless, greatly designed, yet annoying and just weird. They're there for no reason, just to add questions, and that makes the end really weak just for the distraction of the demons.
Overall, I quite enjoyed it. It does make you wish it was longer, and that's good.
Not the best on Amilova but in my Top 30 easily.
7.9/10
Really nice story!!!!
Chewys 07/15/2018 16:34:07