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Amanda and Benjamin 4 Chapter IV

Chapter IV: Fourth Place

Amanda: * kitten *
... : You had to complete a three-stage memory, bravo!
Amanda: Uh ...
... : You do good work, keep it up!
Shadow: Who are you?
... : A simple servant of Breakers memoirs.
Amanda: Really?
Shadow: The Breakers memories? It is you who take the control of humans to make an army!
... : Well done Shadow, see, we do not exist, but that does not mean that we are not cruel! We own this powerful body count as leader of our army!
Rayman and Amanda AH GOOD!?
Ly: NEVER! ! !
... : HAAAA! These heroes désépérants! You think he wakes up?
Rayman: * goes hand in front of face * Tell me I'm dreaming ...
Sonic: Listen to me boy! it'll be difficult for you to recover from the defeat that we will make you!
... : I look forward to it! (Disappearing)
Sonic?!?
Rayman: O_o
Shadow: We must act quickly! Very soon!
Rayman: I understand ...
Sonic: Yes ...
Rayman: Well, our continuos road.

* Our hero enters the fourth place, this time it's a Neko-City, in the evening *

Ly Nekora how a monster like him was born?
Amanda: Well ... you remember when Tily was pregnant?
Ly: Yeah I know, it was awful ....
Shadow: It's weird, the city is lit when there is nobody!
Ly: When we were lead the assault against Nekora, we did encounter one!
Amanda: Yes ...
Shadow: But your friend remembered guards!
Guard 1: Circle the area! It should not escape!
Amanda: Oops!
Shadow: Hmm!
Guard 1: Attack them!
Sonic: Cool! I bored! (Sonic rushes attacking guards)
Amanda: * dark * YHAAAAAAAAAAA on guard!!
Ly (Tire balls white)
Shadow: Stupid Guards (Saute performed and the Homing Attack on guards)
Rayman: Shadow, you wanna help?
Shadow: No thank you.
Rayman: Mhhhh ... As you wish.

* Shadow Guards capture and floor plate, Shadow can not respond! ! ! *

Guard 2: The first approach that I am making a bunch of Hedgehog!
Rayman Amanda Gloup!
Shadow: LET GO - ME! ! !

* The black hedgehog's trying to struggle, but there is not! *

Ly: How we gonna do?
Rayman Amanda: Uh ...
Shadow: HAAAAAAAAARRRRGH! ! !
Warning: THE FARM THE HEDGEHOG! ! ! (Give a kick to Shadow)
Sonic: He would not do that!
Rayman: Yes ...
Shadow: (Flashes in red) CHAOS ........
Sonic: Take cover, it's going to boom! ! !
Rayman Amanda: AHHHH!!
Shadow: BLAST! ! ! (Create a devastating explosion!)
Rayman: OH GOOD BLOOD!
Warning: Char Aspique asked! ! !
Ly: HO NO! WE WILL BE Bomb!
Shadow: AAARRRGH! ! !
Sonic: Considering Shadow can be quiet, but do not rest on our laurels! Will help!
Rayman Amanda: No problems!

* The tanks Aspiques take everywhere *

Sonic: OUH!
Ly: ARGH!
Shadow: GGRRRR! ! !
Rayman Amanda: It hurts!
Sonic: These are not toys for children! (Jumps and does a Homing Attack on char)
Rayman: You're right my post!
Shadow: The Char starts me run! ! !
Amanda: Indeed! * Jumps up and tries to destroy the char *
Ly AARRGH! They are fast!
Amanda: * falls and breaks a nail * My beautiful beautiful nails
Sonic: Raaahhh!
Ly: (Aim and shoot down the barrel of a tank)
Rayman: * steals and gives kicks on char *

* The tanks are destroyed gradually *

Sonic: We'll have to boost it! ! !
Rayman Amanda: YEAH! * Attack other tanks *
Shadow: AAAARRRGH! (Makes a homing attack)
Rayman Amanda YHIA!
Caution: We need more reinforcements! Bring the Lapiens! ! !
Rayman: So there must be careful!
Sonic: Cool! ON watts going to fart! ! ! (Dark and attacks lapiens)
Rayman: YHIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
Shadow: Hop! (Grabs a gun guards) Mmh! (Tire on lapiens)
Rayman: J'savais not know you had a gun.
Shadow: I just grab one of the guards!
Rayman: Really?
Amanda: Let Rayman must play Shadow the hedgehog''''.
Shadow: Huh?
Sonic: You know it was with Black Doom!
Shadow: HAAAA YES! It was fun!
Rayman Amanda: * laughing a little *
Grade: not move! Or you shoot!
Shadow: Silly rabbit! (Jump and stun the guards)
Rayman: Shadow Go!
Shadow: Yeah! (Bats guards) Hop!
Rayman: * jumps and attacks the guards *
Sonic: Okay everyone has been served!
Rayman Amanda: YES!
... : Not everyone!
Ly: Who?
... : A simple via stout monster I immediately show you! (Transforms into a giant black plantre named: the net of the devil)
Shadow: Damned!
Rayman Amanda: O_O
Devil's Snare: RRRRRHHHHAAAAAAA! ! !
Sonic: Youhou! Yeah, finally some action, let's go!
Ly: Yes!

\ \ Rammstein - Du Riechst So Gut / /

* The plant spits acid glaviaux *

Rayman: * disgusted * Ah.
Sonic: No way to attack his head, it is too high!
Rayman: I know!

* The plant spits acid glaviaux again *

Amanda: Yuck!
Ly: I'll try ..... aim well ..... (Draws a white ball) Damn! Agitte it too!
Rayman: Damn!
Shadow: (thinking)
Guard: Attack them!
Sonic: Oh no! Not yet!
Shadow: I found it!
Rayman: What?
Shadow: Let me do it!

* Dark Shadow is attacking the guards while biting their guns *

Rayman: Wow!
Shadow: I think it's good! CHAOS .......... CONTROL!

* The time will stop, Shadow can pull the head of the plant quietly! *

Shadow: Voila!

After 30 seconds * Time * recovers

Rayman: Ah, thank you Shadow!
Shadow: Nothing, but I do not think that's enough!
Sonic: Yeah, if you could beat your record!
Shadow: He beat an enemy in 13 seconds?
Sonic: Hehe, another mustache did not see it coming!
Rayman: Indeed.
Shadow: ATTENTION! ! !

* The plant hit the ground! *

Rayman: Ooh la vache!
Sonic: Shadow! Again with your Chaos Control!
Shadow: You're cute, my blue gauge is empty, I have no gun and there is no cover!
Rayman: Damn!
Sonic: So how do we do?
Shadow: You make me swell! * Catch Sonic and the balance on the head of the plant *
Amanda: Mhhhh ... Do not argue please!
Sonic (On the head of the plant): ALREADY SEND IT AS Me ORBIT! ! !
Rayman: Hu .....
Rayman: * ahem *
Shadow: Pff ....
Rayman: Well then!?
Shadow: Go ask the blue thing - top!
Rayman: OK!
Sonic: SHADOW! I swear THAT WHEN I REDESCENDRAI, I'll kick your THE THORNS!
Amanda: * begins to shed a tear *
Ly: What happens to you - does Amanda?
Amanda: * sits on the ground and sobs *
Ly: Amanda! What happens to you - does - it?
Amanda: * sobbing * These two hedgehogs!
Ly: Ok!
Shadow: SONIC! YOU MOVE THE THORNS AND BUTE ME THIS JUNK! ! !
Sonic: Elvis At your service!
Shadow:-_-;
Amanda: * whisper * Anything ..

* Sonic jump and try to touch the head of the monster *

Amanda: I can help you please?
Sonic: That's good going!
Amanda: * sigh * arms crossed
Sonic: That's not true! It moves too!
Amanda: Oh dear ...
Sonic: Come by!
Amanda: * waits *

* Sonic takes a hit, and loses his tomb earth rings *

Sonic: Ouch! It is tougher than I thought!
Amanda: Yes.
Ly: How are we going to do?
Shadow: Hmm! * Approaching the monster * Hey! Thee!

* The monster roars *

Shadow: Yes, You! Big mouth! Since you can not have destroy us food! ! !
Amanda: You're c **!
Shadow: Go! SWALLOW ME FIRST! THE MOST POWERFUL FOOD GROUP! ! !

* The Shadow * gobbles monster

Sonic: SHADOW! !
Amanda: NO!
Ly: But what took him?
Sonic: That's not cool!
Rayman: Pffff ...

* Suddenly the monster explodes, Shadow and covered with blue snot *

Shadow: * cough *
Amanda: So, that was your plan?
Shadow: Yeah, entering his digestive system and blow his stomach! And I found it too!
Ly: A string of memory!
Rayman: It recovers please!
Shadow: Well, it's good for me!
Rayman: Yeah!
Rayman: Allons-y!
Shadow: OK!

* Our five go off *

... : You are slow.
Amanda: * turns around * Who are you again?
... : Nothing more than the fruit of your imagination.
Ly: What do you want? Again!
Rayman: * jumps up and gives a kick to the unknown * YHIA!
... : Ouch. * Makes a fist on Rayman *
Rayman: Ouch! * Grabs the unknown and thrown violently against the wall *
... HOU YOU! TU ME THE HEATER NAIRS LA! (Jumps and falls violently on Rayman)
Rayman: Sa ******! * Takes his head and gives him a shock *
... : HAAAARRRGH! Very well, since this is how we will use the strong manner! You'll see and it is not likely to make you laugh! Strip dirty bastard! * Disappearing *
Rayman: * sigh *
Amanda: There is something wrong with the two hedgehogs.
Shadow: I agree, while it does not smell very good!
Amanda: Yeah.
Rayman: Well, continue to seek channels memory please.
Sonic: Yes!
Amanda: There go the friends ^ ^
Ly: Yes.

End of Chapter IV

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From http://2raymanm64.deviantart.com - Original post

15Sep2012

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