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Blah, I can't win with comments today. Keeps changing it to what I put on the next page.Oh well let me just leave this one then! Although there is a few translation errors - I found this page came out very nicely. I especially liked what happened in panel three with the hands grasping at Irina's bag. Sucks to be her but she deserved it as the media usually sends the wrong message to the public. lol

TroyB のコメント: Bliss のコメント:Although there is a few translation errors

If you find some, don't hesitate to quote them here in the comments, we'll correct them !!!

Well I'm not an expert at corrections but I'll try my best. I think it should read like this though!
1st panel: If he makes it through this...This will be a miracle!
1st panel - 2nd bubble: One of these...That's for sure!
2nd panel: It appears that the victim, Hugo Cohen, is in critical state but is stable. (Or could add, is thankfully stable. Only to give Irina some points to the fans. shrugs She seems like a big fake. )

That's all that I caught - don't kill me. ;o lol

TroyB のコメント: Bliss のコメント:I especially liked what happened in panel three with the hands grasping at Irina's bag. Sucks to be her but she deserved it as the media usually sends the wrong message to the public. lol

Irina will maybe make a little apparition later... it's an interesting character .

Thanks for your comments and your support Bliss !!!

My pleasure ^^

Pulse: Ok
Breathing: Normal
I think he's going to make.

(Or, if he makes it through, it'll be a miracle, but only if his pulse and breathing are NOT okay)

Attack or supernatural act?
Hezbollah, Mossad, or Super-hero?
One of these, that's for sure.

(so this world knows superheros exist? Interesting)

The victim Hugo Cohen is in critical but stable condition. The pub will need complete renovation, and the two perpetrators of the mysterious explosion have yet to be apprehended. Stay tuned for more information as the situation developes. This is IRINA VANILKOVÁ TO ČTi.

How was the take? We don't need to re-shoot, do we?

No, this'll do, I think.

Hey, watch out! The camera!

Tks for your suggestions. We'll have them in count

diogo のコメント:Tks for your suggestions. We'll have them in count
no problem. Adrien asked me to help and I like the comic. I haven't done the next page yet because I'm waiting for some advice from a friend about journalist jargon.

TroyB のコメント: DanB のコメント:I haven't done the next page yet because I'm waiting for some advice from a friend about journalist jargon.

Wow, you're a real perfectionnist !!!