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This is silly bad more and more do i start to believe Tenshinhan will become the gardian of the earth.
Translate Ouroboros 08/13/2019 10:08:46
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A few corrections: That guy is like a cornered animal
I see... For you to intervene
Not sure if that counts as a correction but in first panel Mr. Popo is dead! He cannot be called ''Mr.'' anymore 
Great page as usual Chewys 
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Removing Kami's clothes for allowing using Piccolo Daimao's drawing was a smart move.
Pretty sure Crilin's going to use Kienzan at this point. In canon DBZ he would have killed Nappa with that technique if he wouldn't have dodged.
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Yep... i originally intended to maintain Kami´s gi as white: like an opposite Piccollo. But i couldn´t get nice pannels (not to mention the motion effects needed in next pages).
So, i just chose to make Kami fight in a black gi. I finnally made up my mind when i saw the fanmangas Dragon Ball SP and Pouerte´s U13 special, where Kamisama is seen fighting in this black gi.
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Ok, wow. Either King Kai worked some magic, or these guys won't stand a chance against Vegeta.
Translate Jason Phoenix 08/13/2019 17:12:55
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'We were too hasty' might sound better than 'we hasted too much'
Translate Pixel-Platypus 08/13/2019 18:20:52
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Raditz just added Lord Popo to his kill count! Does that mean Raditz is the strongesf being in the multiverse?
Bad joke aside, things are looking grim. I imagine Krillin’s secret technique is the Kienzan. It’s the only way I can picture being able to kill Raditz, since the Kikoho didn’t work.
Also, I’m curious how powerful Kami was when he was young?
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I always wondered why he didn't just restore his own youth. Piccolo diamo did it and he got stronger, so kami only had to restore his own youth and trounce his evil half.
Same with the earthlings really, in DBM they are old men, yet they have the means to be young right at their fingertips.
It's not like it's unfair, Vegeta's 62 at this point and he hasn't aged a day.
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Well... i guess they are happy with their lives as they are... plus, i don´t think Dragon Balls are still on Earth.
Translate Chewys 08/14/2019 02:00:59
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No dragonballs on earth anymore?
Well that's interesting, that really raises the stakes for them.
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If this were TFS Popo, I could see him just rising up like a zombie, bitch slapping Raditz, and saying his famous "Pecking order" line.
Translate Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 08/14/2019 05:54:14
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BTW Chewys you got Kami's and Mr. Popo's PLs wrong. Apparently there is an official PL for Kami unless ones listed in Shonen Jump don't count as canon. Apparently an issue of SJ Magazine had Kami's PL during the Saiyan Saga (during training) at 220 and Mr. Popo's PL at an astounding 1030. I actually find it pretty incredible that if Kami had wanted to help Goku and Piccolo out that the could've just ordered Mr. Popo to defeat Raditz. Though if you think about it, it actually makes sense that Mr. Popo would have such a high PL for early Z standards since to properly train Yamcha, Krillin, Tien, and Chiaotzu to their Saiyan Saga PLs he'd need one that high.
Translate Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 08/14/2019 06:00:01
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Yep, i know the official lists... but they make no sensd when you read the manga.
Those lists put Piccolo father at 260. And Golu as well. Then Goku encounters Popo and gets defeated: Popo is above 260.
Then Popo says Kami is stronger than him. And when Goku attacks Kami mistaking him for Piccolo, the same Goku who had just defeated Piccolo, he gets rejected by Kamid finger... soo... Kami is way stonger than Piccolo
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Such brutality! I didn't imagine Popo would go out so quick! Can't wait to see how this all shakes out!
Also as someone mentioned before, Kami's line "we hasted too much" should go:
"We were too hasty"
Keep up the amazing work!
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Je ne sais pas si le découpage non conventionnel apporte beaucoup. Malgré tout on comprend ce qu'il se passe, mais je pense que cela aurait gagné en spectaculaire si tout ceci avait été décomposé en plusieurs pages:
BigFire 10/18/2011 12:37:24On voit la terre trembler comme dans les premières cases
Ensuite la statue se fissurer et la tête tomber. Et enfin page suivante toute la cité sombrer sous les eaux.
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BigFire сказал:Je ne sais pas si le découpage non conventionnel apporte beaucoup. Malgré tout on comprend ce qu'il se passe, mais je pense que cela aurait gagné en spectaculaire si tout ceci avait été décomposé en plusieurs pages:
valdé 10/18/2011 13:01:28On voit la terre trembler comme dans les premières cases
Ensuite la statue se fissurer et la tête tomber. Et enfin page suivante toute la cité sombrer sous les eaux.
effectivement, ici le découpage a une importance car les scenes de mouvements sont devoupées de facon "originaleé" mais les scènes calmes sont de simples carrés (partiellement cachés, d'ou une différence dans la dynamique (c'est presque une consigne de mise en scene pour anim quoi^^)
le spectaculaire oui, mais j'ai fait ce choix pour plusieurs raisons en fait :
- voir une scene de destruction de planète sur 10 pages et rien d'autre à la 1ère semaine du concours n'aurait pas été très intéressant je pense :/
- ensuite l'action ici est sensée se dérouler très rapidement
- enfin, cette page, toutes comme celles qui ont un fond noir (l'upload amilova le coupe un peu beaucoup parfois) sont des flashbacks sur lesquels ont reviendra plus tard ^^
j'espère avoir répondu à tes interrogations ^^ mais je vais faire quelque chose de beaucoup plus impressionnant quand on verra la scène "de l'intérieur".....
Le découpage m parait correct personnellement. J'aime bien le rocher, assez énigmatique!
mbuma 10/24/2011 00:01:40Автор
mbuma сказал:Le découpage m parait correct personnellement. J'aime bien le rocher, assez énigmatique!
valdé 10/24/2011 00:35:09merci de ton avis =) mais je crois qu'au dela de la qualité, c'est plutot la fluidité qui est remise en cause ^^
le rocher ? la statue ?^^
Un tremblement de terre... difficile a faire, hein? Bien pense, le coup de l’onomatopée dédoublée.
Ashura Thor 10/31/2011 08:35:08Автор
Ashura Thor сказал:Un tremblement de terre... difficile a faire, hein? Bien pense, le coup de l’onomatopée dédoublée.
valdé 10/31/2011 09:15:52oui pas évident, à tel point que certains amis ont pas compris x)
sinon, le brrrr, je me suis dit, pour qu'il soit lisible en a5, fallait bien ca