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著者 : Chewys
チーム : This....IS MY BOOMSTICK, Demerzel, Gregoreo, bnkjk, JustWatchingManga
Original Language: Español
公開のペース: 火曜日, 土曜日
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No!Not Bongo too!Don't you dare Chewys!
John Boredonquixote 09/16/2017 17:50:25著者
This saiyans are mercyless
Chewys 09/17/2017 01:45:23By the way i liked Bongo too... we might see him again in some flashback in Universe´s 9 story
i think the sentence "did you kill chiaozu bastard?" as "you killed chiaozu, you bastard"
venuu 09/16/2017 18:45:47Yeah it might be better if phrased differently. I mean seeing as Bongo and Gerkin(?) are the only ones there and Bongo didn't do it, then it's kinda obvious that Gerkin did it. Maybe though it would be better to phrase it as "You killed Chiaotzu, didn't you? You bastard!".
Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 09/17/2017 08:33:25yeah that way the sentence would be better if added "didn't you" with it
venuu 09/17/2017 18:20:51Chewys のコメント:
Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 09/19/2017 07:42:34Chewys you should probably change Tien's line where he ask Gerkin if he killed Chiaotzu to this: "You killed Chiaotzu, didn't you!? You bastard!"
Maybe the way you worded it works better in Spanish, but in English it just sounds really awkward. I mean the way it's worded sounds like he doesn't know that Gerkin did it, but it's pretty obvious Gerkin did it and that Tien is just asking for confirmation.
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I understand. I'll change it as soon as i get to the PC
Chewys 09/19/2017 13:42:37