Like several redrawn pages in the New Addition of Bata Neart, these two pages actually formed one page in the Original Bata Neart. Now, for the first time in the webcomic, I’m actually going to show you the Original page:
Bata Neart re-development continues with this setup page for the 'Camogie' scene. The original page is on the left, and I've always been a little annoyed with how it turned out. On the right, is my attempt to correct that. Hope it turns out well in the end :D
First test run with my newly arrived Pentel Brush Pen. I like how the ink settled in Dr. Rianne's hair compared to the Faber Castell PITT pens i used on the rest of line work .
This drawing is part of a 17th anniverary celebration of +Carlo Jose San Juan comic Callous!
When I first drew this page in the original Chapter 4, this was Aoife’s first re-appearance in her original re-draft design (which is what I use for her now).
Just in case people were wondering if I make up character names, proof of 'Aoife' comes courtesy of Coca Cola Ireland. Thankfully, this sugar-free version of the soft drink wouldn't make an already hyper Bata Neart character worse if you had shared it with her :D