https://www.amilova.com/jp/feed/comments.rss?c=6559.16 ♥アミロバー♥の最新の漫画を読んでください！ Mon, 29 Apr 2024 20:39:40 +0000 https://www.amilova.com/jp/comics-manga/6559/abducting-the-aliens/チャプター-1/ページ-16.html?c=462721#RClast Riff 13 Thanks. Actually my biggest problem with the wordiness and what I was complaining about was fitting it in the panel with the art. But really that's as much an art/design problem as wordiness. Sat, 14 Jul 2012 01:58:09 +0000 https://www.amilova.com/jp/comics-manga/6559/abducting-the-aliens/チャプター-1/ページ-16.html?c=461575#RClast Pat You are doing great with the "wordiness". It fully goes into a topic of discussion between Mac and Yumi. It gives a the story more depth. So far, I like this and I hope you'll continue making more pages. Wed, 11 Jul 2012 04:19:51 +0000 https://www.amilova.com/jp/comics-manga/6559/abducting-the-aliens/チャプター-1/ページ-16.html?c=453466#RClast Riff 13 Yet another example of my pages being a little too wordy for their own good. Oh well. I still like Yumi's little speech at the bottom of the page. I like how it came out. I hope it sounds honest and genuine. I think it does, but then again, I don't agree with a word of it. Fri, 15 Jun 2012 04:04:10 +0000