Amilova.com: DBM U3 & U9: Una Tierra sin Goku: チャプター 9, ページ 15 コメント https://www.amilova.com/jp/feed/comments.rss?c=21189.15 ♥アミロバー♥の最新の漫画を読んでください! Mon, 20 May 2024 18:56:08 +0000 Chewys のコメント: https://www.amilova.com/jp/comics-manga/21189/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/チャプター-9/ページ-15.html?c=1009003#RClast Chewys I understand. I'll change it as soon as i get to the PC Tue, 19 Sep 2017 13:42:37 +0000 Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami のコメント: https://www.amilova.com/jp/comics-manga/21189/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/チャプター-9/ページ-15.html?c=1008969#RClast Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami Chewys のコメント: Chewys you should probably change Tien's line where he ask Gerkin if he killed Chiaotzu to this: "You killed Chiaotzu, didn't you!? You bastard!" Maybe the way you worded it works better in Spanish, but in English it just sounds really awkward. I mean the way it's worded sounds like he doesn't know that Gerkin did it, but it's pretty obvious Gerkin did it and that Tien is just asking for confirmation. Tue, 19 Sep 2017 07:42:34 +0000 venuu のコメント: https://www.amilova.com/jp/comics-manga/21189/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/チャプター-9/ページ-15.html?c=1008358#RClast venuu yeah that way the sentence would be better if added "didn't you" with it Sun, 17 Sep 2017 18:20:51 +0000 Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami のコメント: https://www.amilova.com/jp/comics-manga/21189/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/チャプター-9/ページ-15.html?c=1008258#RClast Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami Yeah it might be better if phrased differently. I mean seeing as Bongo and Gerkin(?) are the only ones there and Bongo didn't do it, then it's kinda obvious that Gerkin did it. Maybe though it would be better to phrase it as "You killed Chiaotzu, didn't you? You bastard!". Sun, 17 Sep 2017 08:33:25 +0000 Chewys のコメント: https://www.amilova.com/jp/comics-manga/21189/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/チャプター-9/ページ-15.html?c=1008247#RClast Chewys This saiyans are mercyless By the way i liked Bongo too... we might see him again in some flashback in Universe´s 9 story Sun, 17 Sep 2017 01:45:23 +0000 venuu のコメント: https://www.amilova.com/jp/comics-manga/21189/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/チャプター-9/ページ-15.html?c=1008207#RClast venuu i think the sentence "did you kill chiaozu bastard?" as "you killed chiaozu, you bastard" Sat, 16 Sep 2017 18:45:47 +0000 John Boredonquixote のコメント: https://www.amilova.com/jp/comics-manga/21189/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/チャプター-9/ページ-15.html?c=1008192#RClast John Boredonquixote No!Not Bongo too!Don't you dare Chewys! Sat, 16 Sep 2017 17:50:25 +0000