Amilova.com: DBM U3 & U9: Una Tierra sin Goku: chapter 16, page 22 Comments Feed https://www.amilova.com/en/feed/comments.rss?c=23440.22 Read the latest comics at Amilova.com Fri, 26 Apr 2024 12:34:43 +0000 Chewys said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1081112#RClast Chewys There!! Corrected. To correct the Adiós i have to erase it anf upload the page again. I'll do it later Mon, 18 Mar 2019 12:24:56 +0000 Ultimate-Perfection said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1081093#RClast Ultimate-Perfection Saved by the bell again, Yamcha! I bet Raditz's scouter is picking up Tien and Chiaotzu training in solitude. Hopefully Krillin and Master Roshi can help Yamcha intercept Raditz and intervene in making sure the former Crane School students from a premature trip to King Yemma! Mon, 18 Mar 2019 02:43:30 +0000 Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1081074#RClast Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami "Chewys" said: Chewys "nowhere" should be "anywhere". Unlike most languages, double negatives a big no-no in English. Also as Pixel-Platypus pointed out, "scandal" doesn't really fit; "commotion" would work better. Also you could replace "Adios" with "farewell"; I think Raditz Saiyan that sarcastically would work. Sun, 17 Mar 2019 23:33:52 +0000 Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1081072#RClast Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami A better fit would be "commotion". Sun, 17 Mar 2019 23:28:02 +0000 John Boredonquixote said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1080933#RClast John Boredonquixote Tien for the rescue! Sun, 17 Mar 2019 14:22:18 +0000 Pixel-Platypus said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1080928#RClast Pixel-Platypus You might want to replace "scandal" with "noise' Scandal moreso refers to morally dubious activity. Sun, 17 Mar 2019 12:51:01 +0000 Chewys said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1080909#RClast Chewys I forgot to erase that balloon Sun, 17 Mar 2019 02:49:40 +0000 Pixel-Platypus said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1080908#RClast Pixel-Platypus Adios? Didn't know Raditz could speak Spanish. Sun, 17 Mar 2019 02:46:32 +0000 Chewys said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1080905#RClast Chewys I´m sorry! The page wasn´t translated! I had some problems with that Sun, 17 Mar 2019 00:55:25 +0000 HyperSonic_1985 said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1080876#RClast HyperSonic_1985 What hapend to the words? Sat, 16 Mar 2019 21:45:30 +0000 Jason Phoenix said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1080815#RClast Jason Phoenix All that's missing are those old-timey cards with the words on them and a catchy theme tune Sat, 16 Mar 2019 15:58:34 +0000 Pixel-Platypus said: https://www.amilova.com/en/comics-manga/23440/dbm-u3--u9%3A-una-tierra-sin-goku/chapter-16/page-22.html?c=1080746#RClast Pixel-Platypus I think you may have forgot some words. Sat, 16 Mar 2019 10:13:48 +0000