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Didules 22

Dans la 3e case, deuxième bulle, "Essaye de ne pas trop mettre le bazar" serait plus naturel ^^
Et dans la case suivante, "ce qui restera de ces mecs", pas "ce que".
Sinon, beau boulot!

Didules 11/20/2014 20:29:57   
rickicki 2

Pour le bazar, je ne suis pas convaincu.
Pour le reste, c'est fait.

rickicki 11/23/2014 15:11:37   
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Ryak-Lo

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Original Language: English

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Genre : Action

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